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Post by Enigmatic Goose Wed Dec 12, 2018 2:16 pm

Well, I liked the frog. Laughing

Pretty good.
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Post by LadyBex Tue Dec 25, 2018 7:13 pm

It was.... you know, I don't know.
It was weird.... but missing something...
Sold on Graham now - that performance was really good.
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Post by The Creeping Spleen Thu Jan 03, 2019 1:37 pm

Meh. You had the front half of one story (the blind kid and the "monster"), and the back half of another story (the "mirror universe"), but somehow they never quite meshed together.
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